So, this book immediately grabbed my attention when I saw it in Asda, on the same shelf as A Good Girl’s Guide to Murder. I bought it a few weeks later and started reading it and….
If I’m completely honest, this book didn’t really meet my expectations. I thought it had a lot of potential…and it was a book that was easy to read. I did like Monica’s character, and I felt bad for her that her mom was so traumatised by her oldest daughter’s death, it had a huge impact on her relationship with Monica. It broke my heart when Monica thought about how low she sat on her mother’s list of priorities, given that it was her younger brother’s birthday her mom used for her passwords.
I didn’t think that it was necessary to have the chapters from five years ago, written from Jen’s perspective. Honestly, those really threw me out of the story…and seemed wholly unnecessary, since anything that was revealed in Jen’s chapters was very quickly uncovered by Monica. And switching between first and third person is very jarring.
I was disappointed that, despite there being chemistry between them, nothing happened between Monica and Ginny. For a lot of the book, it felt like there was a buildup to them getting together…and I’m extremely disappointed this was ignored in favour of pushing Monica together with a guy who she barely seemed to know exist.
I did think there were too many threads in this book. They weren’t really woven together seamlessly; which makes sense, I guess. The tagline on the front of the book doesn’t really fit with anything that happened, though. ‘Five girls lied and five girls died’. The five girls dying is obvious. Those lying…well, I might be able to think of about three, maybe four, who were lying throughout the book. But there was too much going on for those dots to connect. I didn’t have the, ‘That makes sense’ moment when the truth was revealed. And honestly, the whole thing about Jen felt like it was just tacked on to explain what had happened.
This book had so much potential, but unfortunately for me, it just fell completely short. There was too much pushed into this book…and the ending really spoiled the whole thing for me. I might check out other books by this author in the future, but unfortunately, this one isn’t on my ‘read again’ list.









