(I received a free copy of this book in exchange for a review).
(This review may contain spoilers).
I thought the idea of this book was quite an interesting one, but although the plot was fairly intriguing, I did feel that the formatting to this book made it difficult to read. Each chapter was mostly a block of text, with no paragraphs where new people spoke.
The characters I could easily relate to in this book were Jerel and Rich. I would have liked to see more of their relationship and their banter. There was too much summarising of their interactions and with the other characters, I kept getting a bit confused with the genders of certain other characters, too.
It was interesting to see how the heist went, though I’m still not sure I understood exactly what it was they were trying to accomplish.
I think this book would benefit from a proof reader. It could also be expanded, with more detail included for some of the supporting characters. As it is, the book was quick and easy to read, but I think there is room for improvement.
